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Here is a dog model I've been working on
the eyes need a little work and there are still some changes in the fur I would like to make

comments?

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The proportions a great.
Is it me or it is too low polygonal in some places.

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The legs. From what I can gather the front right leg is either lacking some edge loops or the skinning needs to be revisited. The back legs are little skinny check the proportions there and the front legs eeh looks pretty good.

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awww nice.. the dog hv cheeky face

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Its very nice 3d effect.The colour that are used is very nice.The shadow effect of dog is very nice. The front leg is pretty good.The colour combination is good.I appreciate your skill.can you tell me which 3d software you use?

3D Graphics Starter Joined: 17 Apr 2010 Posts: 3

hey thanks guys btw i used 3ds max
i havn't updated on this site for a while so here is one

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The whiskers are too jarring. They look out of place and might benefit from a slight blur or less definition. They just stand out too much compared to the rest of the dog.

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looks nice, I like the body, specially the legs. The head looks a bit cartoonish, i don't know if it is your idea, anyway keep up the good work Smile

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It looks good. I agree with Mr. Trax. I think that the back legs are too skinny and the front right leg also looks long. I think you should work on it. It would also be better if you make the furs more "FURRY".
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that is awesome ,dude .the fur effect is really impressive .

Looks pretty good, thing is the whites of the eyes are too big. A dog's pupils and irises fill most of the visible eye.

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nice modeling and texturing but i thing the lighting can you make it better

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Great work! I like the colour.

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Nice dog. Is it stand alone work or meaby part of some big project?

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Great job. Love the depth from the collar to the fur. Looks pretty real.

3d forums user Joined: 19 Jul 2011 Posts: 20

nice fur, what are you using? is that max's default or a plug-in?

3d forums visitor Joined: 27 Jul 2011 Posts: 17

nice dog.I love the lighting you use

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the head looks defenitly cartoon ... maybe you should improve the four .. keep working

nice work but the back legs are little thin ! but nice

Andyba	Posted: April 18, 2010 Post subject:
Site Admin Joined: 25 Jul 2005 Posts: 899 Back to top	The proportions a great. Is it me or it is too low polygonal in some places. _________________ Andyba, 3d artist skills: 3d modeling, texturing, rendering, 3d character animation, compositing 3d software experience: 3ds max, Maya, Softimage XSI, Deep Paint 3d, Body Paint 3D, Wings 3D, Z Brush 2d software experience: Adobe Photoshop, Adobe After effects, Macromedia Flash, Freehand

Trax	Posted: April 20, 2010 Post subject:
3D forums member Joined: 18 Mar 2010 Posts: 40 Location: Washington State Back to top	The legs. From what I can gather the front right leg is either lacking some edge loops or the skinning needs to be revisited. The back legs are little skinny check the proportions there and the front legs eeh looks pretty good.

virtualWorld	Posted: May 06, 2010 Post subject:
3d forum advanced guest Joined: 04 May 2010 Posts: 7 Back to top	awww nice.. the dog hv cheeky face

gillispy456	Posted: May 07, 2010 Post subject:
3D Graphics Starter Joined: 07 May 2010 Posts: 1 Back to top	Its very nice 3d effect.The colour that are used is very nice.The shadow effect of dog is very nice. The front leg is pretty good.The colour combination is good.I appreciate your skill.can you tell me which 3d software you use?

TanadrineStudios	Posted: July 01, 2010 Post subject:
3d forums user Joined: 01 Jul 2010 Posts: 18 Back to top	The whiskers are too jarring. They look out of place and might benefit from a slight blur or less definition. They just stand out too much compared to the rest of the dog.

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tucho	Posted: July 07, 2010 Post subject:
3d forums user Joined: 05 Sep 2009 Posts: 23 Back to top	looks nice, I like the body, specially the legs. The head looks a bit cartoonish, i don't know if it is your idea, anyway keep up the good work

bryan	Posted: August 26, 2010 Post subject:
3D forums Frequenter Joined: 08 Jun 2010 Posts: 250 Back to top	It looks good. I agree with Mr. Trax. I think that the back legs are too skinny and the front right leg also looks long. I think you should work on it. It would also be better if you make the furs more "FURRY". _________________ My Animation Services

MSpark	Posted: December 06, 2010 Post subject:
3d forums user Joined: 02 Dec 2010 Posts: 23 Back to top	that is awesome ,dude .the fur effect is really impressive .

The_GodfatherSJP	Posted: December 06, 2010 Post subject:
3D forums member Joined: 24 Nov 2010 Posts: 32 Location: Baltimore Back to top	Looks pretty good, thing is the whites of the eyes are too big. A dog's pupils and irises fill most of the visible eye.

weliamwals	Posted: December 17, 2010 Post subject:
3D Graphics Starter Joined: 17 Dec 2010 Posts: 1 Back to top	nice modeling and texturing but i thing the lighting can you make it better

MichaelDavidEthington	Posted: March 19, 2011 Post subject:
3d forum advanced guest Joined: 19 Mar 2011 Posts: 6 Back to top	Great work! I like the colour.

Lis	Posted: March 27, 2011 Post subject:
3d forums visitor Joined: 06 Mar 2011 Posts: 15 Back to top	Nice dog. Is it stand alone work or meaby part of some big project?

musik8101	Posted: May 22, 2011 Post subject:
3d forums visitor Joined: 02 May 2011 Posts: 15 Back to top	Great job. Love the depth from the collar to the fur. Looks pretty real.

gustavoeb	Posted: July 19, 2011 Post subject:
3d forums user Joined: 19 Jul 2011 Posts: 20 Back to top	nice fur, what are you using? is that max's default or a plug-in?

behemoth0413	Posted: July 27, 2011 Post subject:
3d forums visitor Joined: 27 Jul 2011 Posts: 17 Back to top	nice dog.I love the lighting you use

Vincent Desjardins	Posted: September 08, 2011 Post subject:
3d forums visitor Joined: 08 Sep 2011 Posts: 17 Back to top	the head looks defenitly cartoon ... maybe you should improve the four .. keep working

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3d forums visitor Joined: 08 May 2011 Posts: 12 Location: india Back to top	nice work but the back legs are little thin ! but nice

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