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samir Posted: August 12, 2009   Post subject: bike
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3d artist gallery Andyba Posted: August 13, 2009   Post subject:
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The background is too dark and the seat is not visible because of it.
Also the tires are too dark or not lit properly thats so that the volume details are lost.


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NickolasM Posted: September 18, 2009   Post subject:
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Andyba rights. Very dark background. Try using a light source Omni instead of Spot. This will give you an even illumination across the scene.

Sickmind Posted: May 11, 2010   Post subject:
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I really like it. The cogs of the gears re verry detailed !

bryan Posted: June 21, 2010   Post subject:
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The background is too dark. Lighten it up a bit. The Background swallows most of the bike and it blends with the bike's seat. Very Happy

David3dartist Posted: September 01, 2010   Post subject:
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Looks really good, you did a great job on the placing of the mesh, you can feel the weight of it.

Tiffny Posted: September 13, 2010   Post subject:
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It looks nice, really a wonderful job

baalnazzar Posted: September 13, 2010   Post subject:
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That's my favourite renderer Smile Bgr is too dark indeed. As Andyba says - some elements needs more work with materials. Anyway it's a really good job and nice model Smile

3d artist gallery S. Silard Posted: September 15, 2010   Post subject:
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The texturing is not the best , but very nice model !!!

3d artist gallery nbimage Posted: September 26, 2010   Post subject: Concur Concur
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S. Silard wrote:
The texturing is not the best , but very nice model !!!


I really dig the feel and proportions of the model but I have to agree the frame could use a texture upgrade. The intricate parts are a very nice touch too. The render a bit dark, an omni light and a support light to bring the shine out could do it wonders. Other than that I don't think I could make a better bike myself so kudos!

cinematicfusion Posted: November 07, 2010   Post subject:
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think it looks fantastic....but I do agree the background is a little too dark to see the model.

3d artist gallery patricia3d Posted: November 12, 2010   Post subject:
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Very nice. Just add some more lights towards Seat and Handle

nelson22 Posted: March 10, 2011   Post subject:
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Cute! Very simple and plan. Great job.

chin Posted: December 21, 2011   Post subject:
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brillient rendering and high skill

DeFuze Posted: January 08, 2012   Post subject:
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The model looks great, but not a fan of the lighting or render. An outdoor setting or light ambient light would suit this scene better.

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