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samir
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Posted: August 12, 2009
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mental-ray.

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Posted: August 13, 2009
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The background is too dark and the seat is not visible because of it.
Also the tires are too dark or not lit properly thats so that the volume details are lost.
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NickolasM
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Posted: September 18, 2009
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Andyba rights. Very dark background. Try using a light source Omni instead of Spot. This will give you an even illumination across the scene.

Sickmind
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Posted: May 11, 2010
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I really like it. The cogs of the gears re verry detailed !

bryan
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Posted: June 21, 2010
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The background is too dark. Lighten it up a bit. The Background swallows most of the bike and it blends with the bike's seat. Very Happy

David3dartist
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Posted: September 01, 2010
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Looks really good, you did a great job on the placing of the mesh, you can feel the weight of it.

Tiffny
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Posted: September 13, 2010
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It looks nice, really a wonderful job

baalnazzar
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Posted: September 13, 2010
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That's my favourite renderer Smile Bgr is too dark indeed. As Andyba says - some elements needs more work with materials. Anyway it's a really good job and nice model Smile

3d artist gallery S. Silard
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Posted: September 15, 2010
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The texturing is not the best , but very nice model !!!

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Posted: September 26, 2010
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S. Silard wrote:
The texturing is not the best , but very nice model !!!


I really dig the feel and proportions of the model but I have to agree the frame could use a texture upgrade. The intricate parts are a very nice touch too. The render a bit dark, an omni light and a support light to bring the shine out could do it wonders. Other than that I don't think I could make a better bike myself so kudos!

cinematicfusion
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Posted: November 07, 2010
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think it looks fantastic....but I do agree the background is a little too dark to see the model.

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Posted: November 12, 2010
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Very nice. Just add some more lights towards Seat and Handle

nelson22
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Posted: March 10, 2011
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Cute! Very simple and plan. Great job.

chin
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Posted: December 21, 2011
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brillient rendering and high skill

DeFuze
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Posted: January 08, 2012
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The model looks great, but not a fan of the lighting or render. An outdoor setting or light ambient light would suit this scene better.

songjuyu
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Posted: March 27, 2012
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the bike looks great. I happen to want to buy one recently : )

Frontopni
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Posted: April 05, 2012
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I like the whole feeling.


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