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This is some old stuff, but I always wanted to know what people think about it.
So please critique.

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I like it... the only crit is the background is TOO empty... and too straight.

I would add some mountains in the background... or some more houses Smile

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I like it. especially the voulmetrics...

Site Admin Joined: 25 Jul 2005 Posts: 799

Yeah the volumetrics is the only thing I like myself Very Happy

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3D Graphics Starter Joined: 12 May 2009 Posts: 4

Thats very beautiful, I wouldn't add mountains or houses in the background, hills might be a little closer to what you may have been aiming for. Unless you want to keep a serious theme going on with it, in which case mountains might be good.

I think houses would distract from the main area of the scene.

Site Admin Joined: 25 Jul 2005 Posts: 799

Thank you insanityprincess! And welcome to the 3d forums! Smile

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3d forums user Joined: 13 Apr 2010 Posts: 23

I like the house and the combination of the stones, the tree and the grass on the wall. The light is verry impressive too.

I like the house, tree, and the overall textures...pretty good. I agree add something in the background remember atmospheric perspective things further back have low detail and are less saturated. The light, in my opinion, is a bit much. Look at some photos that have sun rays I could be wrong but I don't think light rays are that bright.

oh to add... my eyes are being directed to the top left corner due to the bright white corner.

3d forums visitor Joined: 08 Jun 2010 Posts: 11

Very nice. I cant say any critiques. Good job

3d forums user Joined: 01 Jul 2010 Posts: 18

I don't know if its just me, but the leaves and edges in general seem almost too sharp. Especially the leaves/grass.

Huva	Posted: February 26, 2009 Post subject:
3D forums member Joined: 04 Jan 2009 Posts: 28 Location: Moldova Back to top	I like it... the only crit is the background is TOO empty... and too straight.

redho	Posted: February 28, 2009 Post subject:
3d forums user Joined: 11 Mar 2005 Posts: 22 Location: Antalya Back to top	I would add some mountains in the background... or some more houses

simpo	Posted: April 16, 2009 Post subject:
3D forums member Joined: 16 Apr 2009 Posts: 28 Back to top	I like it. especially the voulmetrics...

Andyba	Posted: April 21, 2009 Post subject:
Site Admin Joined: 25 Jul 2005 Posts: 799 Back to top	Yeah the volumetrics is the only thing I like myself _________________ Andyba, 3d artist skills: 3d modeling, texturing, rendering, 3d character animation, compositing 3d software experience: 3ds max, Maya, Softimage XSI, Deep Paint 3d, Body Paint 3D, Wings 3D, Z Brush 2d software experience: Adobe Photoshop, Adobe After effects, Macromedia Flash, Freehand

insanityprincess	Posted: May 12, 2009 Post subject:
3D Graphics Starter Joined: 12 May 2009 Posts: 4 Back to top	Thats very beautiful, I wouldn't add mountains or houses in the background, hills might be a little closer to what you may have been aiming for. Unless you want to keep a serious theme going on with it, in which case mountains might be good. I think houses would distract from the main area of the scene.

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Andyba	Posted: June 03, 2009 Post subject:
Site Admin Joined: 25 Jul 2005 Posts: 799 Back to top	Thank you insanityprincess! And welcome to the 3d forums! _________________ Andyba, 3d artist skills: 3d modeling, texturing, rendering, 3d character animation, compositing 3d software experience: 3ds max, Maya, Softimage XSI, Deep Paint 3d, Body Paint 3D, Wings 3D, Z Brush 2d software experience: Adobe Photoshop, Adobe After effects, Macromedia Flash, Freehand

Sickmind	Posted: May 11, 2010 Post subject:
3d forums user Joined: 13 Apr 2010 Posts: 23 Back to top	I like the house and the combination of the stones, the tree and the grass on the wall. The light is verry impressive too.

Trax	Posted: May 12, 2010 Post subject:
3d forums user Joined: 18 Mar 2010 Posts: 22 Location: Washington State Back to top	I like the house, tree, and the overall textures...pretty good. I agree add something in the background remember atmospheric perspective things further back have low detail and are less saturated. The light, in my opinion, is a bit much. Look at some photos that have sun rays I could be wrong but I don't think light rays are that bright.

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3d forums visitor Joined: 08 Jun 2010 Posts: 11 Back to top	Very nice. I cant say any critiques. Good job

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3d forums user Joined: 01 Jul 2010 Posts: 18 Back to top	I don't know if its just me, but the leaves and edges in general seem almost too sharp. Especially the leaves/grass.

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